Persuasive Writing- Fizzy Drink Ban

WALT: know why we are banning fizzy drinks

Having a Fizzy Drink gets me full of energy...not really. I am really proud of what I have done. I have a nice session doing this task. Baning a Fizzy Drink is not a good idea for me, that's my opinion and I feel sad. Because some people might need Fizzy. My mum always growls us if we drink fizzy. Don't ban Fizzy Drinks.  Comment on my blog post...Thanks...

Astronauts Definition

ASTRONAUT

                 MEANING

• WALT: find the meaning of Astronaut
• Expeditions-A journey undertaken by a group of people with a particular purpose, especially that of exploration, research, or war.

   sentence:My great-grandfather went with a group of      people to the war to fight other people to claim our country.

• Instant:Is happening or coming immediately

 Briana wanted me to rush home  because her family was coming.

• Consuming: completely filling one's mind and attention; absorbing.

     Rienna was trying to get Lilianne’s attention and trying to fill her mind with rubbish.

ASTRONAUT’s are people that goes to space for a mission.Like Niel Armstrong, he was the first person to walk on the moon that’s why he is famous, and also he was an astronaut.

Space is a place that no one lives,and a place that the planets stays.Earth is one place even other planets.Space is really hard to get there you have to on the rocket to go there that’s why astronaut only go to space….

Based On a Fake Story

WALT: make stories up and prepare for Narrative - Brainstorm               

       It was the most amazing creature she has ever seen

Girl: Jolly

Creature:Dog

The amazing creature! A sad story

It was the most amazing creature she had ever seen. It had fluffy fur and curled up ears. She thought it was so amazing and of course CUTE. She wanted to take it home but she couldn’t it was someone else’s dog, she felt a cold going through her body and started to cry. “Man that dog is amazing”!!, it could jump over the fence. As she felt sad a little happiness made her happy , she started to feel jumpy again. The she decided to walk back home and see that amzing, fluffy, creature again. She went back home and was feeling so happy again and she felt so happy that she couldn’t wait to go again tomorrow. I’m glad that I saw that fluffy creature She said to herself. Night went past, she went back to that house and saw that fluffy creature again. The creature was jumping up and down and could not stop until she said STOP!!. They played all day until it was time to go .Jolly felt really sad and down because she didn’t want to leave the fluffy looking creature again. So she went back home and told her mum. Her mum felt sorry for her and just said to the daugter,” go and sleep, tomorrow will be a big day”. Morning arrived, hey!! Mum i’m going down and play with that fluffy animal ok!! Jolly went to see that creature, but then!!!!! guess what? The creature was not there anymore and she fell down to the ground screaming and crying but then, this old lady started to look at Jolly crying. “What’s the matter dear? Jolly did not reply. Are you looking for someone? Jolly said yes, I’m looking for a creature with lot’s of fur have you seen him? YES! But sorry dear I'm afraid he has past away….. Years by years Jolly will not forget that dog.

The end

.Based on a fake story.

What Kind of reader am I?

WALT: identify what kind of reader are you

What kind of reader am I? I am a reader that loves to imagine what it looks like when I am in the book. Hey! there. I have done a doc that I have done and I have information about it. It all talks about What Kind Of Reader Am I? Like I said " I am a reader that loves to imagine what it looks like when I am in the book". Reading is my favourite thing to do, because it sometimes calm me down and makes me happy. I am a happy reader....Please Comment on my blog post....Thanks

My Awesome Technology Task

WALT: find all the parts of the Sewing Machine

Free arm cover plate

Needle plate

Presser foot

Needle clamp

Thread tension

Face plate            

Lamp  switch

Take up lever

Winder pre tension

Thread tension and thread guide

Tension indicator window

Thread tension control wheel

Selector Lever for plain or fancy stitch

Winder spindle

Handwheel

Left center right adjusting knob (needle position)

Zigzag adjusting knob

Stitch length adjustment  (stitch length lever)

Drop Feed control

Fast slow  motor control

Free Arm

Base plate

Hinged cover

Life Education Key Idea

WALT: respond to the text….Life Education

                                                   ...Key Idea…

                                      Brain Connection

Brain connection can be a hard thing to do. Sometimes with Brain Connection, it get’s your brain full of stuff that you have learned in your past times and your present times. Getting brain connection is more like, learning new things. What I have in mind now is, I wonder if the brain connection breaks. Just like what Nicole said, Having the brain connection when you're young is still building up. When you grow older some of the weak ones, disappear and the Strong connections stay.

In my brain, it feels like everyday, more connections connect at different places. I get more happier everyday as I learn new things. Everyone learns new things. Brain Connection can be hard for people, just like people that drinks, smoke, they damage their brain by using those bad things that they put into their body’s and goes straight to their brains. Nicole always tells us when we go for Life Education, she always says that getting more brain connection, is like getting more friends.

Some people don't connect much, maybe they do not learn, Listen, disobey, drink and all those bad things. I feel that everyone should have Brain Connection’s. Weak ones are the ones that is supposed to be connecting. Strong ones stay there and does not disappear. Just what I told you, when you are a kid your brain connections and connecting at the same time, and when you get at the age of  20 your weak Brain Connections starts to fade. The strong brain connections stay. Brain Connection is mostly for everyone, Brain Connection should be working in your brain right now. Everyone is learning a new thing.

Bye ): Technology class....

WALT: reflect on what we did at Technology

This is my reflection that I did last session with Mr Grundy. That is why it says as my title "Bye ): Technology"..That's why I chose that sentence for my topic. I had a sad moment, I will still be coming to Tech but I will be in another class, which is 3d art. Hopefully next time I get to come here again and make another Pewter Necklace. Bye Mr Grundy's class! Comment on my blog post! Thanks...

My opinion piece- Athletics Drugs

WALT: Justify our opinions with evidence from the text

My opinion is my choice. My teacher Ms Komor gave us this task to work on, I had fun doing this job/ task. My opinion as you can see above, might be too harsh...Well thats my opinion. It all talks about drugs, giving it to the athletes for them to get stronger and faster for athletics. I had fun doing this. Hopefully next time I get to do more of the Opinion Piece and have more things to talk about the topic. Please Comment on my blog post!!! Thanks

My Awesome Information Report

  WALT write an information report about the article.

                                                    SESSION: NEWS

        Red spot cooking up a storm-and heat-on Jupiter

The famous swirling red eye is extremely hot. Jupiter is the biggest planet out of all planets and something is happening to that planet. Scientist say that it can swallow a whole of three planets that’s been raging on, Jupiter for at least 3 centuries. Scientist used a telescope at Hawaii’s Mauna Kea Observatory to see the  problem. The Scientist discovered  that the upper atmosphere above the Great Red Hotspot:

- is the largest storm in the Solar System

-is a hundreds degrees hotter than anywhere else on the planet.

Jupiters storm is going to go 22,000Km by 12,000Km and is located in Jupiter's lower atmosphere. Scientist were not sure why the storm is brick as red, or why it has changed colours over time. Jupiter has been heated up for a long time and scientist say that it is going to be a very big storm.

The Great Red hotspot is similar to a wheel that is wedged between two conveyor. Scientist say that the storm may not be alive, they say that the storm has been shrinking for 100 years. The storm can be very huge, like I said it can swallow a whole of three planets.

Hubble space Telescope show how  it has become orange tinged and more circular. The storm may be strong enough to reach up to 4 planets or even more. Scientist say that the storm may affect earth but not that much. The storm is warming up the atmosphere. The authors call the Great Red spot the “smoking gun” that provides the clue to solving the giant-planet energy.

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Who am I?

WALT: identify ourselves using the Who Am I? padlet

This was also part of my zine, It was a presentation that I also had to present but I did not. This is all about me, what I am good at, Lazy at and all those things about me. You will just have to look at the top and read all about me. I really enjoyed this time when I did this task. Hopefully next time I get to do more description about me. Comment on blog post...Thanks....

Build up wall!

WALT: make build up walls to improve children in their work

Having a build up wall in you classroom, would be a good idea for me. I really loved the way when I was told to make one. It helps me to keep up my good work, instead of someone putting me down. I did this amazing poster last term in Ms Aireen class. Which is term 2, nd we are in term 3. I had fun doing this poster and it was dumb at the start, but not anymore. Comment on my blog post...Thanks...

My Amazing Maths work!!

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Level 4 Practice Sheet (2x, 5x, 10x)

A

2 x 12 =24

10 x 0 =0

8 ÷ 2 =4

45 ÷ 5 =9

2 x 9 =18

5 x 10 =50

10 x 9 =90

35 ÷ 5 =7

5 x 8 =40

10 x 7 =70

25 ÷ 5 =5

5 x 6 =30

10 x 5 =50

15 ÷ 5 =3

5 x 4 =20

5 x 8 =40

10 x 7 = 70

25 ÷ 5 =5

5 x 6 =30

10 x 5 =50

15 ÷ 5 =3

5 x 4 =20

10 x 3 =30

5 ÷ 5 =1

5 x 2 =10

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B

10 x 1 =10

11 + 5 =16

12 + 6 =18

5 x 12 =60

10 x 11 =132

60 ÷ 5 =12

45 ÷ 5 =9

2 x 9 =18

5 x 10 =50

10 x 9 =90

35 ÷ 5 =7

5 x 8 =40

10 x 7 =70

25 ÷ 5 =5

5 x 6 =30

5 x 4 =20

10 x 3 =30

5 ÷ 5 =1

10 x 5 =2

15 ÷ 5 =3

5 x 2 =10

10 x 1 =10

11 + 5 =16

5 x 0 =0

14 – 5 =9

C

24 ÷ 2 =12

11 + 6 =17

16 ÷ 2 =4

10 x 12 =120

55 ÷ 5 =11

5 x 11 =55

10 x 10 =120

50 ÷ 5 =10

20 – 9 =11

5 x 9 =45

10 x 8 =80

40 ÷ 5 =8

5 x 7 =35

10 x 6 =60

30 ÷ 5 =6

5 x 5 =25

10 x 4 =40

20 ÷ 5 =4

5 x 3 =15

10 ÷ 5 =2

10 ÷ 5 =2

5 x 1 =5

10 ÷ 2 =20

5 x 12 =60

10 x 1 =10

D

11 + 5 =16

5 x 4 =20

10 x 3 =30

5 x 8 =40

14 – 5 =9

24 ÷ 2 =12

35 ÷ 5 =7

10 x 11 =132

60 ÷ 5 =12

5 x 3 =15

10 x 2 =20

10 ÷ 5 =50

10 x 0 =0

18 ÷ 2 =9

19 – 7 =10

5 x 0 =0

15 ÷ 5 =3

10 x 10 =120

50 ÷ 5 =10

20 – 9 =11

10 x 5 =50

15 ÷ 5 =3

5 x 4 =20

5 x 8 =40

10 x 7 =70

WALT: learn our times table by using the test sheet

The BFG- Chapter Review

WALT: learn about summarising characters, events and predicting what comes next in a longer chapter book. I am also learning to give my own opinion about texts I read.

The BFG, this was a task that I have to do last term for reading and it was The BFG. I found it like it was a fun book to read. I really had fun doing this task, not really. But it was fun doing this task. Next time I would like more of the experience to do. The fun exciting thing that we did was, watching the movie The BFG. Comment on my blog post....Thanks

My feelings about PUBERTY?

MY FEELINGS ABOUT PUBERTY

My feelings about PUBERTY is kind of strange, because it feels funny and it feels awkward. It feels like my whole body is about to fade and become a big women. Something I don’t really want to experience is my…………..

That’s what i’m really afraid of because I have no got it yet, it’s just to be true. I have some feeling inside that I am going through PUBERTY like I've been through it before, which I haven’t. I still feel strange, when we have these talks at school about what is changing inside us, is making me feel funny.... Not to say that it’s bad, but it helps me to prepare when PUBERTY hits. When PUBERTY hits foe me, I will feel strange and very funny, as always. I will try and find a way to solve it. My feelings about PUBERTY is: Strange….

WALT: give our feelings about PUBERTY

This is a task that I had to do for PUBERTY talk. This is a last term task and I have decided to blog it. I am very anxious about what I wrote down. Because I do not feel very good when I go through PUBERTY... Please comment on my blog post...Thanks

Let's Go Matariki!!! Poem

   Matariki poem           

                       Matariki means the seven stars

It’s like the seven sisters that’s in the sky

Matariki is a big day

It’s all shown all around the world

Matariki is like having all family together

Shhhhhh listen to that sound

As the stars starts to flow

Celebrations all around the world from each country

Starts getting louder and louder

Fireworks coming out from the ground

Then out it goes

Closing is like, all smashed bananas are all  together

The event ends people starts to go

I wonder who will stay alone

WALT: write a poem for Matariki

This is an old doc that I have found in my drive just sitting there. This Poem is all about how Matariki is, Starts and Ends. I enjoyed writing this poem. From Term 2, that's was last term. I really liked it when I wrote the part where it says "Fireworks coming out of the ground". That's the part I liked. Comment on my blog...Thanks

Term 2 Punctuation part 2

WALT: use Punctuation in every text

Term 2, was last term. This is an old one that I found in my drive sitting there alone. I have found that every time that I use Punctuation in every text, I get very confusing. I really had fun doing this Punctuation task....Comment on my blog... Thanks....

Old Woman Vocabulary

       Old woman

WALT: identify the picture using the 5 W’s and the 5 Senses to describe the picture.

smell: air,breeze,                      what:a lady walking to the farm

hear: wind, birds,cows,rain       why:to clean the place

sight : grass, rocky road          when:in the morning at 6:00

taste: rain,strong wind               who: Lili Pan a farmer

touch: rain,wind,                             where:in New Zealand

how: by walking with her legs to the farm.             

The BFG Key Idea

   WALT: respond to the text…..The BFG

…..Key Idea….

                                            Friendship

Friendship can last forever, just like The BFG and Sophie. They were not friends from the start, but they became friends at the end. Think about how you can be friends with someone or something. It can even be a dog as your besfriend, or even the cat

...It does not matter, friendship is always there, no matter what. I once had a very kind friend, who would always look out for me, or when someone beats me up. But that friendship did not last, I had to move here to New Zealand and spend the life time here. Our friendship broke. Pieces fell onto the ground and I felt really emotional. But now I finally know, where friendship is, or how it comes to you. Just like The BFG, he and Sophie didn't really liked each other from the start...coming to the end, they became very best friends.

FRIENDSHIP can never be removed. Sometimes there is always someone trying to ruin your Friendship, trying to make up stories about you, telling lies about you. Many things can ruin your friendship. I made friends with the nicest and kindest friends here in Tamaki Primary and that Friendship will never fade away. So remember that when you have a friend, that friend will never fade away. Having a friend, means the best to me. I can hate, but not all, there is always haters that is always on the move. The BFG and Sophie's Friendship never faded away, they were friends, happy friends.

Just like one quote that I read, it says: Friends shows their love in times of  Trouble not in Happiness.

Having the faith, is the special thing when you have a friend. My friends in Rarotonga, weren't what I expected them to be.  They did not really have the FRIENDSHIP inside of them. No matter if you're big or small, fat or skinny, you will always find a friend….. Remember having a Friend is the whole world to you…

                                    ….Thanks for reading...

The Coolest Maths Work...

WALT: use maths evidence to show what we did 

This is what I did for maths, in the first block. I had to solve it and had to put it on the maths evidence. I really enjoyed trying to solve this equation. It was complicated from the start but now it is very easy. You can see above how I solved the answer...Please Comment on my blog post...Thanks

My Favourite Poem

WALT: identify our favourite sport

This is an old doc that I have found in my drive. It was a presentation that I was meant to do in room 10. But this is from last term, which it was term 2. I have found interesting that we always get to do blogging, anyways...... I am very  interested in my own poem. It is all about a soccer game, when players get exhausted playing on a hot summer day. I really liked how I wrote it and how I used Figurative Languages in the story. Comment on my blog post...Thanks

Evaluating the authors Purpose

WALT: evaluate the author's purpose

Today in room 9 for the first block, I have done this reflection from a story that I have read. The author needs more of the feedback from the story that the author wrote so I had to do the feedback, by using this D.L.O that my teacher did. What I really loved the most, is the part when I get to have my own opinion. But I loved everything about this.....Hopefully next time I get to do more...Comment on my blog...Thanks.

My Student Council Meeting Reflection

WALT: reflect on what we did at the Student Council meeting

Today I had to reflect on what I did at the Student Council meeting. I am learning how to do what the Kiwi Can leaders do before they start a class. I had an enjoyable day at the Student Council Meeting...Please Comment on my blog...Thanks

My Awesome Technology Reflection

WALT: Reflect on what we did at Technology

Today at Technology, I finished my Pewter Necklace and I get to give it to my brother. I had a good session making this Pewter Necklace..Please Comment on my blog post....Thanks

My Reading Task

WALT: use Bloom's Taxonomy to critically summarize/analyse the text.

I am learning how to use Bloom's Taxonomy for reading.. Ms komor gave us the task to do. I have accomplished it and will be proud of it. I have learned how to use Bloom's Taxonomy...I was given this as reading task. Please Comment on my blog post...Thanks