My Old Goals For Term 2

WALT: set our goals for Term 2

Growing old, this is my old Goals that I have prepared to blog. I have set these goals and now I have achieved them. I am so proud of myself and so impressed and obsessed. I finished doing this presentation and I wanted to blog this. I made some mistakes and have not achieved some, I am very happy and amazed and very obsessed. Hopefully next time I get good grades and achieve all of my goals. Please Comment on my blog. Thanks...

Deeper Analytical thinking (:

WALT: develop deeper analytical thinking when we read a text

Reading between the lines is one. When I read the lyrics I get information about it and try and fit it into the question that was given to us. Ms Tracey gave me this task to do, I am blogging it now. I am ready to do more of the Lyrics Study and to think more in to the text. I really enjoyed this time while doing the task that was given to us. I want to know more how to read into the text and more of the thinking, deeper thinking. Hopefully next time I get to know how to do more of the Deeper Thinking....Please comment on my blog post....Thanks...

Persuasive Letter

 8/04/2016                    WALT: write a letter to the Ministry Of Health

  Ministry of health

Dear Jonathan Coleman,

I am writing this letter to inform you about  the ongoing Cigarettes. People here in New Zealand are buying too much drugs. More drugs, more skin cancer that’s why I am writing this letter to you. Why are people here selling drugs? Cigarettes are not supposed to be selling here in New Zealand. It can attract many people to buy Cigarettes. We should banned Drugs here in New Zealand so it won’t affect and anything else.People are dying because of that.That’s why it is so bad to buy cigarettes plus it is expensive you can do better than that.Use the money to buy food for the family not to buy drugs. Over 5,0000 people are buying drugs a year. So my opinion is that we should banned cigarettes. I also think that it is good to banned it for good.Without that, we would be living in a clean and healthy world again.It will be really nice if you do that and I’ll be more happier if you will banned cigarettes and I know people will get mad but it will also be helpful.New Zealand will be a clean place again…..

        Your sincerely

H.A

The Cricket Game....

WALT: read a story and to break it into a Stanza

I am really learning how to break a story into a Stanza. When I did this task with Ms Aireen and my group, I really did not know what to do. I was taught how to read between the lines and also was taught how to break a story into a Stanza. I had a fun time, doing this with Ms Aireen. Reading Task are actually fun to do..Comment on my blog post...Thanks

Sentence Structer

Object subject verb adjective……………...

The boy ate a green apple.

The girl ran on the rocky footpath.

The boy wore a red raincoat.

The girl cleaned her dirty shoes.

Our caretaker has hair like snow.  Mr Wright has a white t-shirt and his pants are blue.  Mr Wright’s eyes are blue.  

The girl was playing with a pink ball.

The lady loved eating  chocolate.

The boy walked on the sandy foot path.

The man wore  a yellow hat.

has glasses that are silver that go to his ears.  He has skin (that) is white and on his arm he has pieces of hair (His behaviour Mr Wright   is a very kind person and he is funny.  Mr Wright picks up ribesh at school, to make it look clean.  He tells me jokes and makes me laugh.  He says to me “Stand in the front so i can run you over” and i laughed.  He used a machine to clean up the leaves and he wears ear muffs.

The headless horeseman

      The Headless Horseman

There onced lived a man with no head he was called the headless horseman.I was thinking this is a non fiction because know one can not live without a head well now ,I am going to describe him.

             

 Once upon a time, lived a man with no head. He had a scary looking horse that had a curse, and a scary looking face on the man, that is WHY!!!! He is THE HEADLESS HORSEMAN. He only appears when it’s halloween, Halloween is his favourite night of all and because he loves to scare adults and also little kids. This man has a pumpkin with a scary looking  face, he had that pumpkin as his head.That’s why he does not have a head.I think this man is cursed by a witch. He wears a coat like a king  does.He is  dressed in black who rides atop a black horse and carries a jack o Lantern under his arm which serves as his primary weapon though he can also be seen carrying an axe or sword. I think he was a king before he had no head.The headless horseman is nowhere to be found. He is the scariest pumpkin head in the world………

Rotten Tooths

    Rotten Tooth

Going throughout the year , kids under 12 even the baby’s are having rotten teeths, and it is also costing a lot.Day by day ,year past year, childern are drinking too much fizzy, and also eating too much sugary food.NOW that the children’s keep’s on eating all those things, childrens tooths are going to be affected and that it is bad for the little kids.

Pay it forward

Pay it forward

WALA WHAT MANAAKITANGA is in relation

to the saying Pay it forward.

Giving food if they are poor

A thing that I can help in the community

Helping them in need

Helping people throughout their problem. Helping them in need.

Help them when they are sick.

Giving special cards.

Help them when they are sick

MAIN IDEA IS…..LEND A HAND IF PEOPLE NEEDS HELP IN OUR COMMUNITY

Languages

Cook Islands:

Eyes

Ears

Mouth

Nose

eyebrows

cheek

chin

neck

hair

head

teeth

English:

mata

taringa

va’a

patangio

mata

raparapa

kauvae

kaki

rouru

katu

ni’o

Sentence development

One beautiful morning at 5:00

A man was preparing for his breakfast. He was going to have eggs on toast.It was smelling really nice.It looked really nice.Also it tasted  really nice. His breakfast was really nice that he could have it everyday. He went to go and got change and off he went to  work with a full  tummy and he was so happy.

THEY WALKED DOWN THE STREET

IT was really dark in the morning, at Summerville.

Their were two girls walking down the street to the shop to buy junk for the them.It was really cold. They went to the shop ,bought their junk and started walking back home. While they were walking back, home they could hear whispering they turned back there was nobody. Next they could smell one of, kind smell it smelled like a dead rat. When they looked back they could smell it again.One of the girls, turned to the front and felt a shadow,she screamed so loud that nobody heard her.She was so scared so frightened.Next they could see a ghost, right there in front of their of their face they were so scared, they ran into the ghost and all the way home.

Sentence structuer

Object subject verb adjective……………...

The boy ate a green apple.

The girl ran on the rocky footpath.

The boy wore a red raincoat.

The girl cleaned her dirty shoes.

Our caretaker has hair like snow.  Mr Wright has a white t-shirt and his pants are blue.  Mr Wright’s eyes are blue.  He

The girl was playing with a pink ball.

The lady loved eating  chocolate.

The boy walked on the sandy foot path.

The man wore  a yellow hat.

has glasses that are silver that go to his ears.  He has skin (that) is white and on his arm he has pieces of hair (His behaviour Mr Wright   is a very kind person and he is funny.  Mr Wright picks up ribesh at school, to make it look clean.  He tells me jokes and makes me laugh.  He says to me “Stand in the front so i can run you over” and i laughed.  He used a machine to clean up the leaves and he wears ear muffs.